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All Deviations
All Deviations


Like an all-seeing falcon
Like a swift timber wolf
Like a tricky, sly fox
I am ever present for you

Always ready to aid you
Willing to make you happy
Fretting over your worries
Wishing for your joy

You are quite confusing
And at times a pain
Yet mystifying, wonderful
From an entirely different world

Someday you’ll realize
Someday you’ll understand
Someday you’ll wonder
Someday you’ll find peace

But no darkness can restrain
My light, nor my beacon, nor my path
Even the darkest night will cease
And day will bring forth a new light

A violent torrent can wreck havoc
But it evolves from gentle waves
A mirror shows our strengths
But also the flaws of our hearts

My strength is my sign, character
My many dreams of the future
And, just what is my weakness?
It, my unseeing love, is you.
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A poem I made to vent my frustration (or is it sadness?).

I hope it's halfway decent for you all. :)
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=underworldriver:iconunderworldriver: Apr 2, 2008, 6:37:17 PM
oh how very nice. i feel this way about someone i know. i would say who, but that would just give it away you know.

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~Save me from my fears, save my butterflies and love me forever, my beloved Styx~
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Remember we all have Rawem0tion* :blackrose:
~Moeagaru:iconMoeagaru: Apr 2, 2008, 6:39:05 PM
Pretty neat poem, I enjoy how it describes the character's willingness to always be there for the one s/he cares for.

Especially the lines:

"A violent torrent can wreck havoc
But it evolves from gentle waves
A mirror shows our strengths
But also the flaws of our hearts"

All too true. Props. ;)

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Singularity is incapable. Togetherness is invincible.
~a-fiery-boom:icona-fiery-boom: Apr 2, 2008, 7:09:48 PM
:bow: Thanks! It made me feel much better just writing it!

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Spontaneous!! Tis one of my many talents! =D

I'm a writer! Watch me type!! :typerhappy:
=Assailant17:iconAssailant17: Apr 2, 2008, 7:13:29 PM
Aww very nice!

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:sing:
"Im lucky Im in love with my best friend
Lucky to have been where I have been
Lucky to be coming home again"
-Jason Mraz & Colbie Caillat
:heart:
~a-fiery-boom:icona-fiery-boom: Apr 2, 2008, 7:13:31 PM
Thank you! :hug:

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Spontaneous!! Tis one of my many talents! =D

I'm a writer! Watch me type!! :typerhappy:
~a-fiery-boom:icona-fiery-boom: Apr 2, 2008, 7:21:27 PM
I know how that goes.

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Spontaneous!! Tis one of my many talents! =D

I'm a writer! Watch me type!! :typerhappy:
~a-fiery-boom:icona-fiery-boom: Apr 2, 2008, 7:29:25 PM
:bow: Thank you!

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Spontaneous!! Tis one of my many talents! =D

I'm a writer! Watch me type!! :typerhappy:
=Assailant17:iconAssailant17: Apr 2, 2008, 7:31:49 PM
Welcome!

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:sing:
"Im lucky Im in love with my best friend
Lucky to have been where I have been
Lucky to be coming home again"
-Jason Mraz & Colbie Caillat
:heart:
=underworldriver:iconunderworldriver: Apr 2, 2008, 10:07:48 PM
yup.

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~Save me from my fears, save my butterflies and love me forever, my beloved Styx~
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Remember we all have Rawem0tion* :blackrose: